Thursday, November 24, 2011

Pivot project

2 comments:

  1. _ Your story is a little bit clear. It shows some dragonball characters fighting each other.In the end, evil wins.
    _ Your stick characters look really interesting. The background is suitable; it's a battlefield which explains they're killing each other.
    _ Your movements are very skillfully created. But there are some gaps between each movement. I think you need to make more frames or speed up the animation to make it look smoother.
    _ I think you need to choose a stronger background music since the animation's conflict is about fighting. You need to make more sound effects so that the viewers can feel pain and anger in the clip.
    _ Overall, I really like your animation, it looks professional. 9.7/10

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  2. Amazing! You have excellent stick style and background . The moving is so wonderful. But the plot isn't very clear. And in addition, the music isn't stong enough so we can't feel the interest of the battle.
    Overall, I really like ur animation. 9,8/100

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